I am a Year 5 learner in rooms 9 and 10 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teachers are Mrs. Moala and Miss West.
Thursday, February 15, 2018
My Scary Narrative.
Once upon a time in the morning at 3am there was three teen boys called max, toby and joe. The
went to a place that was scary smelly and haunted. Once when they got there it was night time because it was far from where they lived and they didn't have that much gas so they walked there. When they got there they used their flashlight to go looking for the haunted pipe. When they found it they tried to find out what happened to the pipe that made the pipe so haunted. But when they went to check what was inside they found small terrifying knome killers that were killing every single person looking around the pipe. But while they were nervously staring at the knome killers the killers said together “HELLO MY FRIENDS HEHEHE. Then the killers started to chase after them while holding sharp carved sticks in each hand. Then max toby and joe started running away with horror from the knomes, but all a sudden toby got stabbed in the leg by one of the knomes then toby collapsed. While toby was struggling to get up he yelled to max and joe
“Just go and leave me behind!” So max and joe sprinted as fast as they could back home while hundreds and thousands of sad tears slowly running down their cheeks. While they were running max told joe to stop. Joe asked max why they were stopping, and max replied back saying “We have to go back and save toby” Joe agreed with max but joe didn’t wanna go back without weapons and protection. So they rushed back home to grab as much protection and weapons as quick as possible. 8 minutes later max and joe arrived at the haunted pipe looking for the knomes and toby. They dropped on to their knees when they saw toby lying dead on the greasy concrete. So joe and max got so angry they used all that anger to destroy all the knomes and carry toby back home. 1 week later they had tobys funeral, it was joes and maxs saddest day of their lives. Another month came by and joe and max were back to living a happy life a again.
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