Today me and room fifteen went to Immersion assembly. When they were there
me and my little brother came to late. Then we threw our bag on
the ground. Then me and my brother went to our class and sate on the ground.
Then all of the classic started to all of the movies that we made.
My favourite part was team 3 and team 2. But my best one was team 3
and it was called family feud. It was fun.
Great to see so many sentences Joseph, with capital letters and full stops! Your next step is to try and think about making your writing interesting for the reader. Keep up this great effort.
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