Wednesday, September 6, 2017

Cross country.

It is important to remember to catch your reader’s attention when you are writing and to hold it using descriptive details that are interesting.

Spend some time thinking about how you felt at the beginning of the Cross Country race, while you were waiting for Mr. Burt to yell “GO!”

Using this sentence starter, begin writing here:
As I stood at the starting line, waiting for Mr. Burt to yell “Go,”  I felt as if…  The feel that I was feeling was that I was going to come last in the race. When Mr. Burt yelled go all of the year four boys ran so that they could reach to the end to finish the big long race. When we were running we had to follow a year 8 to the end and we had to run in the middle of the field. After running in the field we ran behind the golf-post and then run on the side of the field. When we were running on the side we went frew the green gate and then ran to the the all most to the beach. While we were running there were teachers around us so we don’t get hurt. After that when we were almost at the finish line I came 7th place.

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